The Reviews Effect

the reviews effect Atracting Reviews As a writer, a mere storyteller, I find that my skills in self-promotion and marketing strategies are close to zero. I somehow refuse to recognize the importance of these factors, stuck in a romantic, probably outdated idea of reaching the reading world with more traditional methods: a literary agent and or Publishing houses–the dream of all writers! One day, some of those might find my manuscript exciting enough and of high-concept, regardless of whether and how many fans and subscribers I have on social networks. My primary concern is enhancing my writing craft rather than seeking positive reviews from “beta readers” and alleged “Author promoters” offering “Amazon keyword optimization” and other services, pretending that they have read your work and can boost it through their alleged “review-driven book clubs” of 2000 eager readers!  Mark Horrell (mountaineering diarist and blogger) wrote about how authors, especially independent ones, solicit reviewers for their self-published works, emphasizing that:  “Reviews in exchange for free books are fake reviews.”   The entire article here: https://selfpublishingadvice.org/free-books-for-reviews/

Writing Better

writing better Tips for better writing Advice from Chris Banks, founder of ProWritingAid. Too many writers have very strong beginnings followed by mediocre middles and terrible endings simply because they have run out of editing steam. Choose small bite-sized goals and go from top to bottom. Remember that editing often takes as long or longer than writing, so be prepared to put the time in. We promise that you will not regret it. Beware of The Adverbs Adverbs are words that add color or emphasis to a verb. Compare these sentences:• The barista made a cup of coffee.• The barista grumpily made a cup of coffee.The adverb “grumpily” offers an additional layer of understanding to the scene. But, as Stephen King famously said: “The road to hell is paved with adverbs.” Lazy writers tend to use adverbs to modify a weak verb instead of searching for a stronger verb.We certainly don’t suggest that you remove all adverbs; sometimes they will be exactly right for what you are trying to get across. But adverbs tend to prop up weak verbs, and so you should always ask yourself, “Is there a stronger verb I can use here instead?” In all three examples, the strong verb paints a much more nuanced and compelling picture of the action. Weak verb: James ran to school. An alternative, weak verb + adverb: James ran quickly to school.Strong verb: James sprinted to school.Weak verb: Scarlett looked at Stan. An alternative, weak verb + adverb: Scarlett looked angrily at Stan.Strong verb: Scarlett glared at Stan. If you can’t think of the right strong verb by looking at your weak verb in context, write it alone in the middle of a blank page and add as many variations as possible. It doesn’t matter if they are only tangentially related.Write as many as you can think of and check back with your sentence.If there’s a perfect fit, go for it! If not, consult a thesaurus: you now have lots of options to input rather than just the original weak verb. Avoid Sticky Sentences Nobody likes it when gum gets stuck to their shoe. Likewise, nobody likes too many sticky sentences in writing.A sticky sentence is one that is full of glue words. Glue words are used to make the essential pieces of the sentence stick together. They don’t carry much meaning in and of themselves, yet are still necessary to create a coherent sentence.Working words, on the other hand, carry the load of most sentences. They convey meaning to the reader and contain essential information.Every sentence has (and needs) glue words. But when you get too many in a sentence, the sentence becomes sticky. In practical terms, that means it’s difficult to read. You should aim to have less than 40% glue words in your sentences.Some sentences might go over that mark, but that should only happen rarely and for a good reason. Check out this example: • STICKY: I went over to my friend’s house after school and then we just played basketball for a really long time.Glue index: 61.9%  • REWRITE: After school, I headed to my friend’s house and we played basketball all afternoon.Glue index: 33.3%  It’s up to us, the writers, to rework our sentences to be the best possible.A sticky sentence here and there is usually fine, especially if there’s no other way to phrase your thought. A whole book full of them is another story.Use your judgment. You’re the writer, so you have the final say. If you love your sentence despite its stickiness, keep it. If you decide it needs revision, revise it. Final Thoughts Writing is primarily about entertaining ourselves. We should be excited about the stories we craft; otherwise, the lack of enthusiasm will pass on the manuscript. If you are bored or unmotivated while writing, your readers will become too. Find the optimal hour and space to dedicate to your narrative and take a break when inspiration is not in rendez vous.  Know what you’re going to write before you write it.  Write in your preferable place at your most productive time.  Write scenes that excite you. Read your manuscript many times—at least 10—before you give it for editing.  Don’t bore or confuse the reader. Shorter is always better. You’re never going to make your writing perfect—you can only do it better! “So, any place where you feel that your story is slowing down in its pacing, you might look for ways that you can start hooking your reader.”– David Farland –

Fearing the Agents

fearing the agents Fearing the agents Well, it’s neither easy nor funny to face our fears, and for us artists, the fear of rejection is probably the dreariest of them all! “No one understands the pain of rejection better than a first-time novelist looking for an agent,” said Ken Pisani, who writes for film and television. And he continues with humor about the literary agents’ impersonal or automated rejections.  “No one understands the pain of rejection better than a first-time novelist looking for an agent.” Publishing agents are the greatest fear for a debutant writer; trust me, I know–I’m there, doing exactly that. Every day, I check my emails, hoping for feedback, because negative or not, it’s better than frustrating silence. When no response comes from them, it’s utterly demoralizing because it could only mean one thing–the one you refuse to believe: you’re unworthy of their time! Not even an automated, generic answer? Some may be lucky to receive a personalized rejection, even a short critique that could help them revise and perhaps even revamp their writing weaknesses. Others get the typical rejection form of Query Tracker: “… we weren’t able to connect with the manuscript as much as we had hoped to fully champion the project.” Alternatively, “We wish you the best of luck finding an agent who will represent your work!”, or “Unfortunately, I’ve determined that I am not the appropriate agent to represent this material.” I found an optimistically interesting and self-sarcastic (the story of my writer’s life) article while pasting my 5-page manuscript on the Query Tracker platform. A long browsing procedure from one Agency’s website to another, seeking the representatives of my genre, with the risk of never getting a reply … Alas, being a debutant and a non-English-native speaker for the literary industry is like a handicap, and for me, a nightmare to defy while keeping hope. My sole consolation, thanks to internet technology, is self-publishing. Hooray, Amazon KDP, as it nurtures the dream of the little writer residing within. “Trying To Find a Literary Agent Is the Worst Thing Ever.” Should we bypass the relentless rejection stage and do it differently? Sure, but for some unexplained reason, their acknowledgment feels necessary to mark us as authors with something unique to tell and, therefore, worthy of being read. And here we are, knocking on their doors that seem to be hermetically sealed to debutant writers, because a lack of publishing background can’t guarantee their investment. However, we still hope for the bold one who will take the risk to open his door to us.  Ken Pisani humorously addressed the quest’s difficulty (finding an agent for his debut novel) with his amusing, yet so-true article, which describes how “Trying To Find a Literary Agent Is the Worst Thing Ever.” Read the original article in the Publishers Weekly magazine. 

Self-editing

self-editing The long process of self-editing With or without professional editors, all writers undergo the self-editing procedure before releasing their books to the reading world. Read, reassess, and read again is the only rule, even if one decides to address their literary work to editors. It is known that editing is not without cost—what is in this life, anyway? Therefore, self-editing could be the obvious choice for some writers. Thankfully, there are plenty of handy tools to do the job, some better than others, if I may say so. Google for the most suitable application depending on your needs. Although I use both Grammarly (free plan) and  ProWritingAid (premium version), the latter is undeniably powerful. Analytic, with comprehensive story critiques, sensory reports, style improvements, and numerous other suggestions, makes it more than a grammar checker. The rule of thumb in self-editing is to READ your novel, even aloud, again and again. Then put it aside for a while—several days or weeks—and then … well, read it once more!!! Revising your storytelling may take longer than crafting it, but nobody said writing a book isn’t time-consuming.  1. A book outline is a roadmap or blueprint for your story. It tells you where you need to go and when in chronological order. 2. An editor won’t make your story better or more consistent. Only you can do that. 3. If your idea is not exciting, after editing, it will be modified. However, it won’t necessarily be more exciting. I found the following article in the Killer Nashville Magazine the other day, and I couldn’t resist sharing an excerpt. The decision creates a challenging dilemma … or not.  We Don’t Need Editors, Do We? by Philip Demetry “If you do a quick Google search on the benefits and costs of self-publishing versus a traditional route, you will most likely find one blog post after the other, one website after the other, claiming that self-publishing is the way to go. How many of those are in some form inserted into your feed by Amazon, no one can truly tell, but it would be foolish not to suspect the multi-billion-dollar corporation of consciously making their presence felt in the publishing industry. In fact, quite a lot of statistics are backing that claim up. Some claim that the sea of digital self-publishing, having made publishing accessible regardless of quality, is causing traditional publishing houses to crumble. Indeed, this has been the case for some. Small publishers have drowned while larger ones have merged to form even greater giants to withstand the pressure. But will it work? […] It becomes then a philosophical question. The author must ask of themselves: “Why do I write? For whom am I writing?” It might be possible, at the end of your questioning, to arrive at the conclusion that you write primarily for your own benefit, that writing is an exercise in introspection at the end of which a story will emerge expressing that introspection in a way others might relate to. Yet, upon completing this goal a need will arise to share what you have created. It is within this spectrum between one’s personal joy of writing for the sake of writing, and a need to share stories with others, that a writer must find their peace. […] A writer is nothing more or less than a storyteller. We do not concern ourselves with marketing, finance, or strategy in conceiving of our stories. Motivations then, concerning fame, influence, and wealth will never enhance our chances of getting published successfully. The only thing that lies within our power is the ability to improve our writing. Train your writing skills. […] How much value is in the editorial process, which for a traditional publishing house usually takes a year or more? Can your story compete without it?”  Click here to read the entire, inspirational, and fascinating article in Killer Nashville Magazine.